story

This is following up from the previous Snippet of the magic tree and is a lot longer but I hope you enjoy it in this righting I've been trying to plan my righting and add Capitol letters when needed.

Ring ring  ring  ring  ring  ring  Elane raced down stairs and jumped on her little brother Anthony hugged her big sister valaskey then raced upstairs to get changed before her dad woke up and took them out for the usual Sunday breakfast.  She put on her nice little light pink dress with the light yellow sewn on flowers it was a nice dress for a little occasion.  After she went to brush her hair she took a watering can and went down to water her tree the kids each had a tree her mum and dad took them down to a shop once and let the them pick a tree and name it.  Elane Cos a evergreen that was 7 like her and unlike any evergreen tree this tree had silver leaves the shape of stars that shined in the day and night.  Elane felt like she had a special conachen with shimmer  Like she could talk to it and it would  understand and talk back like it could cheer her up and make her feel like she was magic and the most important person in the world.  Some sunny days she would sit at the foot of the tree and read her book or practice her flute.  She loved her tree and cered for it more than the others even her big sister how was always responsible sometimes she was so responsible that elany had to water her evergreen oxygenate (Anthony helped chous it.) but she did not mind a bit because she liked it.  She also had to remind her little brother Anthony because he often forgot and brrm brrm (his plant) got dry and wrinkly.  Elane was just about to go and see if her sister and brother remembered to water their plants so she knew if she had to water them so they would not dry out in the harsh sun that was burning down on them when…That was the next part of the story followng up from “Help we need to protect it if the red queen's army gets their hands on it how noes what they will do”.  Yes I got it we can use a… so like I said before hope you enjoyed it and please comment.

good and bad magic

This is the start of a story that I created in silent writing

My name is Isabella and I am no ordinary girl in fact my family is no ordinary family.  We wear on a mission to capture black magic.  Black magic is a bad from of magic that  turns your heart black and fill you with hate.  Our world got destroyed by it many years ago and now it has come to destroy earth.  Luckily me and my family have so much love in our hearts that we can not get affected by it.  We wear sent on this mission because  31.5.17 we are the strongest people in our nation we had seceded.  Now let me tell you the story.

that was my story hope you enjoyed it.

story

This is the start of my new silent writing story in this piece my writing goal was to plan out my work more and to make it more interesting. 

The magic tree

“Help we need to protect it if the red queen's army gets their hands on it how knows what they will do”.  Yes I got it we can use a…

That was my first piece of writing from the story I started please let me know how I did by comting on it and please keep checking on my blog if you want to read more.

slint writing

This is some of my latest silent writing.It may still have some spelling errors but hope you enjoy it.

The golden unicorn

Creak went the old iron gates as I opened the stable door.  The smell of hay accompanied by the gentle nicker  greeted me as I walked through the gate to the stalls.  As I walked pasted the stalls all the mars poked their heads out and gave me a gentle nudge and even the naughty filly that nips at your pockets gave me a nudge and I gave her an apple well I gave all the meas an apple that was why I was walking down the aisle  but I gave the filly and big apple for being so good.  I turned to go back and muck out the dirty brown hay that is in the stall for sick , injured or birthing mars but something caught my  eye.   I stepped over to the stall that was always open and empty but saw a golden unicorn she open her mouth and...
Thanks for reading. I am really proud of this story because it uses some show not tell.

My writing from music

This is a piece of writing from one of my workshops on how to make a story from listening to music.

I was running in a enchanted forest and came across a white lioness I stopped and gasped then ran towards it and hugged it.  I took in the floury scent and closed my eyes against the bright white fur its mane felt like silk I heard it start to purr tears pricked my eyes and I started to cry.

 So that was my paragraph of my writing I hope you enjoyed it.  Please leave a comment.

slint writing

This is 2  paragraphs  of my silent writing. It may still have spelling errors but I hope you enjoy it.
    Enchanted Forest
I was dancing in a enchanted forest.  The sweet smell of honey wafted into my nose.  The silky soft grass tickled at my ankles.  The sound of the birds singing their sweet melody drifted through the forest.The sun embraced me with warmth and the golden leaves fluttered down like little raindrops.  The rivers that flowed down either side of me sparkled like a 1ooo dewdrops in the sun light. So that was my silent writing paragraphs. I hope you enjoyed it.

my family treasure

This is a antidote of my family treasure hope you enjoy   

My family treasure is my Great Nan's coat.  She lived just out of Timaru and every night she walked to a dancing place to see Great granddad and she  wore her coat every night to the dance.  Every night great grand dad  walked my great Nan home and back. And there is a little patch of worn out fur on the coat where his hand used to sit .
so that was my family treasure hope you enjoyed.