This is some of my latest silent writing.It may still have some spelling errors but hope you enjoy it.
The golden unicorn
Creak went the old iron gates as I opened the stable door. The smell of hay accompanied by the gentle nicker greeted me as I walked through the gate to the stalls. As I walked pasted the stalls all the mars poked their heads out and gave me a gentle nudge and even the naughty filly that nips at your pockets gave me a nudge and I gave her an apple well I gave all the meas an apple that was why I was walking down the aisle but I gave the filly and big apple for being so good. I turned to go back and muck out the dirty brown hay that is in the stall for sick , injured or birthing mars but something caught my eye. I stepped over to the stall that was always open and empty but saw a golden unicorn she open her mouth and...
Thanks for reading. I am really proud of this story because it uses some show not tell.
Thanks for reading. I am really proud of this story because it uses some show not tell.
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