slint writing

This is some of my latest silent writing.It may still have some spelling errors but hope you enjoy it.

The golden unicorn

Creak went the old iron gates as I opened the stable door.  The smell of hay accompanied by the gentle nicker  greeted me as I walked through the gate to the stalls.  As I walked pasted the stalls all the mars poked their heads out and gave me a gentle nudge and even the naughty filly that nips at your pockets gave me a nudge and I gave her an apple well I gave all the meas an apple that was why I was walking down the aisle  but I gave the filly and big apple for being so good.  I turned to go back and muck out the dirty brown hay that is in the stall for sick , injured or birthing mars but something caught my  eye.   I stepped over to the stall that was always open and empty but saw a golden unicorn she open her mouth and...
Thanks for reading. I am really proud of this story because it uses some show not tell.

My writing from music

This is a piece of writing from one of my workshops on how to make a story from listening to music.

I was running in a enchanted forest and came across a white lioness I stopped and gasped then ran towards it and hugged it.  I took in the floury scent and closed my eyes against the bright white fur its mane felt like silk I heard it start to purr tears pricked my eyes and I started to cry.

 So that was my paragraph of my writing I hope you enjoyed it.  Please leave a comment.

slint writing

This is 2  paragraphs  of my silent writing. It may still have spelling errors but I hope you enjoy it.
    Enchanted Forest
I was dancing in a enchanted forest.  The sweet smell of honey wafted into my nose.  The silky soft grass tickled at my ankles.  The sound of the birds singing their sweet melody drifted through the forest.The sun embraced me with warmth and the golden leaves fluttered down like little raindrops.  The rivers that flowed down either side of me sparkled like a 1ooo dewdrops in the sun light. So that was my silent writing paragraphs. I hope you enjoyed it.

my family treasure

This is a antidote of my family treasure hope you enjoy   

My family treasure is my Great Nan's coat.  She lived just out of Timaru and every night she walked to a dancing place to see Great granddad and she  wore her coat every night to the dance.  Every night great grand dad  walked my great Nan home and back. And there is a little patch of worn out fur on the coat where his hand used to sit .
so that was my family treasure hope you enjoyed.  

Welcome to Isabella's blog

Hi, welcome to my blog. My name is Isabella and this is my first blog post. On this blog I will be sharing my learning with you so hope you enjoy it.